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Post by YOURfavoriteJOEL on Aug 13, 2006 15:52:29 GMT -5
I wrote a song a while back, and I figured I'd show you guys. ;D
TELL YOU WHY
V1: He stumbled down that road/ With a cross on his back/ A crown of thorns on his head/ Giving him no slack/ He stumbled down that road/ In pain and agony/ All his sweat, blood and tears/ Was all he could see/ And let me tell you/
C1: Why/ Let me tell you why/ Why/ Why he had to die/ Oh/ Let me tell you why/
V2: They nailed him there/ Through his wrists and his feet/ He hung there/ In what seemed to be defeat/ As he hung that night/ He said father forgive them/ He forgave us that night/ Despite the pain he was in/ And let me tell you/
Repeat C1
C2: He did it for me/ He did it for you/ To die/ Is what he had to do/ So our sins could be forgiven/ So our sins would be forgiven/
Copyright Joel Motes 2006
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Post by Jer on Aug 13, 2006 16:07:17 GMT -5
Great writing
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Post by godsservant on Aug 13, 2006 18:38:06 GMT -5
Good Stuff
that would make a GOOD Easter Song
Amanda
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Post by kaylynmarie on Aug 13, 2006 21:07:29 GMT -5
thats really good!
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Post by YOURfavoriteJOEL on Aug 13, 2006 21:15:33 GMT -5
Thanks so much! ;D
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Post by kaylynmarie on Aug 13, 2006 21:16:26 GMT -5
no problem!
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Post by BORN2SIGN on Aug 19, 2006 19:22:00 GMT -5
I remember you posting this on another forum. For weeks I went around trying to sing the lyrics, but couldn't find an appropriate tune to it. It's really good. I just wish I knew how it went.
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Post by YOURfavoriteJOEL on Aug 21, 2006 13:16:22 GMT -5
Well, the bad thing is, I don't have a tune to it yet... Think of it as a beautiful piano song though(Beautiful MUSIC...I'm not bragging on my words, lol)
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